Monday, July 14, 2008

Review of "A Spirit of Vengeance"

I got a wonderful four-flute review of "A Spirit of Vengeance" from Singapore Sling over on Cocktail Reviews!

Josh, an artist, comes home from an exhibition and learns that his lover, Kevin – also an artist – has been murdered in the home they share with Josh’s actress sister, Kat. The killing appears to have been done by a homophobic gang, but the police can’t find anything to go on.

While he’s coming to terms with his grief, Josh hears Kevin’s voice and feels a wind blowing around him indoors. Kevin urges Josh to catch his killers and get revenge. At first Josh thinks he’s gone crazy, but soon Kevin is coming to him in dreams that feel very real. Kevin reveals that Oscar, his agent, murdered him when Kevin started to suspect Oscar of defrauding him.

Can Josh find a way to unmask Oscar as the killer – or will listening to the advice of a ghost lead him and Kat into danger?

This novelette had a most interesting premise. The opening was powerful, full of raw emotion as Josh struggles to deal with Kevin’s death. The ghost story begins tentatively, with Kevin’s spirit at first so full of rage that he scares Josh. Kevin’s frustration with his new spirit form and his desperation to make Josh believe what’s happening is both sad and touching.

Josh is a likeable hero, numb with grief yet still able to reach out to his sister, Kat, and share in her small triumphs. His longing for Kevin is one of the driving emotions in this story, and his fear of letting go and losing Kevin forever is very moving.

Ms Benedetti gives the reader a different yet satisfying story. My only complaint is that I wish there’d have been more of it – this could easily have been a novella!


This is so awesome, I'm going to be beaming for days!

Angie

8 comments:

Charles Gramlich said...

Wow, that is a good review. Excellent! Congrats!

Angie said...

Charles -- thanks! [hugz] I'm still beaming! :D

Angie

Bernita said...

From the description of your tale alone, I would have given you a whole bottle of champagne!

Angie said...

Thanks so much, Bernita! {{{}}} This is my own favorite of my stories so far, and getting this great review was fantastic, even if is only four glasses instead of the whole bottle. :D

Angie

Anonymous said...

Yay for you! Sounds like a good story, too.

writtenwyrdd

Angie said...

WW -- thank you! Feel free to try it! ;D

Angie

Shauna Roberts said...

What a great review! Congratulations!

Angie said...

Shauna -- thanks, hon! {{{}}}

Angie